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Adjeye-3 ~ I need to be l


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Add some more BASS!!!

Ugg!!! It needs more bass, the snare is not enough to bass. I want to hear the bass behind the synths and other sounds!

Adjeye responds:

(On which instrument can I side-chain the best? I know how to do that but I never used it before, because I didn't knew on which elements.....
And are there other ways you can let the beat come out?
Please pm me!)

NVM I just see you're not a producer :P, If some one reads this, please PM me...
And thanks for the review :)


Not bad

I didn't love the intro arp but at :22 I liked the synth you brought in and it sounded very good with the arp at that point, they mixed very well.
The high pad at the beginning wasn't too great, it added a bit to the song but the progression sounded a little off for the mood of this song. . .

Transition to 136 wasn't too bad, but the synth there didn't mix well into the arp from the beginning. The lower pad sounded good and the high pad again didn't seem to fit the mood the arp gave the song, it seemed like the arp was a lonely sound and the pad was a solo standing against a group, both sound lonely but one has a more heroic feel, which is cool they just don't mix well.

Interlude at 4 minutes-ish was great, not too much critique on that.

The ending sounded a little too much like the ending and got to feeling repetitive but I liked the Booooom outro sound, it goes with the feel of the song.

Don't get me wrong I liked the song, but these are all the things that you might could improve to make it awesome.


Adjeye responds:

Nice review, you need to review me more :P


dont really like the opening arp... kinda ametuer. i dunno could be good for like some gothic music but yea not a big fan of that genre. do like ur snare nice and snappy and clean. definitley could drop some shit out to give it more of a less is more sound and make your build ups more powerful. yea just all through out your trance gate sounds just not great to listen too. sorry if i like crush you just bein honest. needs some more like trance saw action like distortion maybe ill make a track to show you what i mean. yea got potential just takes time....lots of time

Adjeye responds:

ok.. But you know I AM a amateur? I am just 14... so.. And, please keep reviewing me ok?

Sick song dude

you really improved :D

Adjeye responds:

Thats why I want critism, look to my song silent train. The Critism in the first review is really great. I improved from it, also some one told me that only proffesional songs are around the 6minutes (The full version) so other DJs can pick the best parts out for a remix.. From the song mysane some told me not to make a chaotic song, so I did.. And this is it. You know mr green apples review of my last song? I wanted more people give me reviews like that.

Call & response.

If you are interested in learning how to use call & response ...
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Call_and _response_%28music%29

But why did i mention the use of Call and Response when listening to your song?
-The way you´ve used the synths. One to call out and another to respond.

Adjeye responds:

Ow I've putted it in without knowing if there was a name for it, thanks for the link!

Credits & Info


4.14 / 5.00

Mar 20, 2011
11:19 AM EDT
File Info
14.4 MB
6 min 18 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.