Oh hey. I listened to this on your Bandcamp but just found it now here. You really stretch some of the rhymes, but like the rest of the album, it's unapologetically YOU, and I can respect that. The beat really dominates the track at a few points, which takes away from the vox, unfortunately, because I think you really did hit the Charlie Sheen theme on the head.

Excellent

Wow, I knew you did great flash but I had no idea that you could actually music that sounds just as good either! You have amazed and confounded me to no end with this piece. The whole time it just sounds great and I actually like it a lot.

The drums sound pretty cool yet spastic at the same time. The bass line is chilling and provides the life of the song as well I think. The synth when it comes in sounds pretty good as well to me so that turned out pretty good. The lyrics and vocals are superb though. You have a great sounding voice.

When it comes together you seem to be winning at making a house party go on. The rain and added people on the vocals sound pretty good. Kind of get an image of a bunch of people partying while you are singing at the same time too.

Overall, you did a mind blowing job on this. Liked it!!