What kick are you using? The stock one?
try to change that to something slightly heavier.
Needs a lead melody with a sharp synth.
Kick needs to vary a bit.
You have MSN? PM me about the flp.
ya its a equilized fl stock kick but it was the smoothest sounding one i had thanx for the comment i will add you on msn : ]
this isnt half bad
i dont have any improvements for you to make but this is quite enjoyable
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.