What the other two already said.
This is my first song made with Logic Pro 9, and IT'S AWESOME!!! :D
I started this at school, came home, sat down and worked on it from 8:00 PM - 6:00 AM till I was finished. This is undoubtedly one of my favourite melodies I've ever made.
Edit: New version complete! http://www.newgrounds . com/audio/listen/409822
Tell me which sounds better! :D
What the other two already said.
Nice work
Nice work, I agree with DjClyme the bassline was kinda cheezy (heck, this whole piece was)
I really like the melody of it, maybe just make the bass a little heavier.
Haven't used LP at all, but you did a good job for your first song in a new program!
Good work!
Omega
its all about the bassline
sooo... that bassline synth your using is just a little cheezy for me. you may(or may not) want to change it. for your first song in LP 9 this is great!
5|5 8|10 great work! and keep producing music!
DJ~Clyme
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.