this is a great song very well put together makes me happy 5/5 :)
i like it man :)
man keep up the good work,unfinished or not its still great,loved the chord progression.some of the piano noes seemed to high,but thats about the only part i didn't like.other than that is was great.
Yeah, some of the high notes aren't very easy on the ear, should have played with the frequencies or avoided high notes altogether.
an outsiders opinion
to start with i enjoyed this piece as of now but there is always room for improvement.
i feel as though 1:06-1:31 loops a little too long with nothing changing. if this is going to have words or something added to it then it would make sense for it to carry on. and since its repeated again later i feel as though this might have been made for words eventually(?).
the build up at 3:14 fits the rest of the song and works perfectly even though this isnt really an upbeat song where that kind of build up would be used. you did a great job making it work.
also the fade at the end started a little early to me.
again this is just the opinion of someone who isnt all that avid in the art of music, but its out there to maybe give ideas and get you re-interested in working on it. or not. haha. its a nice job mate.
Yeah, I probably should have spiced up the choruses a little bit more. Don't plan on adding vocals, but I've always wanted to do that with any song.
Thanks for the review!
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