A major improvement
The repetition is still there. It's important in a track like this to balance dynamics, so whenever you repeat a note that many times, let the parts you want to bring out stand out above everything else. My other issue is some musical ideas can be unexpected (the hihat intro into BassTown). Balance is the main issue here, as I love the instruments and arrangements. This isn't perfect, but it's truly a huge improvement. Good work!
Thanks a lot, I might try and further improve it, as I feel that I can still do a lot with this track.I consider balnce an issue too, and I am attempting to rectify that, but I'm still fully getting used to the software I'm using, so give me time!
thanks for your advice, you're really very helpful!
You did very good on this
You should be proud of yourself =-)
Keep up the good work (P.S I listened to the whole thing,its great)
thx, i really appreciate that!