A little bit off tune

hey but nice try the melody is a little off tune... dont rush it dude!!! music is all about inspiration!!!! no matter how long u make it ... it doesnt matter how long it is its how nice it sounds!!!!

keep it up~

Intresting , not so great needs alot of work

anywho i can see that you have put lots of effort into this and i sounds like you could make an awesome remix of this song!
Um for the last several reviews i keep forgeting to give you my E-Mail my bad lol
Well anyway here it is please send me aquanox k it would be much appreciated my e-mail is....
captcrunch1989@yahoo.com

Ty again and cya later man.
Sincerely, your biggest fan
Capt.Crunch22