I think this could work as a loop as it stands but if you were to spend some more effort on it and add some progression into the structure it could be quite a nice track, im thinking something completely unexpected like the nice 8-bit ish sound to start it off then about 1 min in a massive drop and break into something wild and completely different from the start! Well I would think it was kewl anyways ;)
Nice job so far mate.
The beginning and the end are very nicely done. There is some great moventment there. You should definitely consider working on the middle, because this is a nice piece. It could just use a little more work, then you'd have an extremely nice piece on your hand. :)
Very catchy. My only grip is that it wasn't switched up much until the very end. Other than that, it was good.
thanks. yeah, i made it kinda quick. maybe i'll add to it.