Nice Melody, bassline can improve.
First of all, you have a nice melody going on in the foreground, it punches, comes out and does loads of fun stuff. The unfortunate side is the bass line. It sounds... dissonant and somehow off the niceness of the melody. What could be clearly done is to push that bassline a bit more so we can have something more than just a drone-like sound that continues throughout the piece. Now, I don't exactly now how you came up with the bassline but I do know that it doesn't sound as great right now and its clearly something you can do to just pump the whole thing up further. For one thing, you can always try making a simpler bass sound, but with more choppiness for the melody. In other words do this: -- -- - - - - <--- fun things like that. Not just --------- <--- straight line. That's not helping you. Of course MAYBE you did make some awesome bassline. Well then you must edit the sound! Well what if you have a bass line that doesn't suck at all and I was listening to just the resonance from the drums? Cut the drums shorter. Again, I don't know exactly the source of this dissonance, but it is something fixable.
Yup. Serious. Nice fun track overall, continue making, but make sure you get a nice balance of sound between the highs and lows.