The piano feels out of place through most of the track, but the tune holds a lot of promise with some goosebumps around when the first minute is over. At 2:05 when the piano cuts back in, I'm just confused. I feel like we've winded up for something more complex than what comes after... Its feels like a good work, just needs a little progress.
haha thats exactly what my friend said to me xD. Are you her in disguise? But the piano part through the song was actually a melody idea for vocals, I plan to take it out when the song is done. Except for the very beginning and the harmony cuts at the end.
Thanks a bunch dude ^_^
I like it
The piano was just loud compared to the other sounds at the beginning, I don't know if that was what you were trying to do. Just not my style. I love how you faded the melody from left and right, that was pretty cool. Though the beat was a little bland, I think that there could be variation in there somewhere, maybe. I love the grungy bass sound, I use that kind of sound for my basses in my songs as well. It just sounds like a repetition though, like it does one thing, goes quiet, then does it again. That's just me, I know I have several songs like this too, I'm just giving my two cents.
Thanks, yea after i uploaded it I noticed some sound issues. My headphones and speakers have 2 very different sounds. xD
GOOD... lacking in layers but has the feel of a great song already
haha thanks for the input ^_^, I'll try to fix the layers as much as i can. But i want the piano to be the main part when its there.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.