Not bad. . .
Not bad, a little simple, and I think you drifted away from the original feeling you started out with and returned with it at the end, it didn't sound bad it was just kinda like a mood change that was a bit abrupt.
What'd you make the kick from, I really liked it!
And the piano was good too, you don't see enough of that normally,
glad someones incorporating it into their work.
Nice work, just build onto what you've got and stretch it out a bit.
Yeah, lol, you're right. It was abrupt because I totally went blank while thinking of how to finish the melody, then I came back and added in what was more similar to the beginning. I've actually been wanting to add a piano into more of my loops/samples. Oh, I usually just take the basic kick and add these effects: Fruity Chorus, Multiband Compressor, Soundgoodizer, and (most importantly) Gross Beat. It gives it that warped sound at the beginning. Yup, I'm thinking I'll find a way of stretching this out to where I like it. (Oh, it's Basic 8 on Gross Beat.) Thanks for the review, man. :D