ONE LITTLE THING
It's one thing that slightly bothers me. Actually it's pretty big if you see it as a part of the track, but the bassline has a certain pattern that doesn't go with the rest of the synths. The song is in Eb or E, I'm just gonna try to explain it in Eb.
Your bassline goes pretty much like this: Ab - Ab - Bb - Bb - Eb - Eb - etc., but your other synths do something else, they pretty much give the impression of Ab - Ab - Bb - Bb - Cm - Cm - Etc.
Now I really love both chord progressions, especially the first one, but I recommend changing the bassline, or adjusting the melodies to go more alongside the chords that the basslines show.
Also, quick note: you might wanna filter the beat that kicks in at 2:22, because when the other sounds are being filtered nicely and slowly get louder, your kick just roughly jumps in, like 'HI THURR!'. Try making the introduction of the kick and snare/clap a little more subtle. :]
Anyway, again, it's a lot of critique, but I see a big lot of potential. Your melodies and layers are really nice and I always like your synths. It's just some small changes that could really have major positive impact on the song.
Great job man, keep this up! :D
Hey thanks for the detailed review! Wish I could get more of these. I agree with just about everything, except I looked it up and I'm using a Cm7 chord at the end of a phrase with a Eb in the bassline, so I think it's OK because Eb in included in a Cm7 chord (a minor seventh chord). I'm still working on my mixing and got some better headphones, which might help. I'll check out your stuff.
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I love every bit of it. like litteraly i like each of the bits making up the song.
the music got me going
well composed song
it make me happy and all the way live when I listening to this upbeat audio.....
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