Can be better

This melody is interesting, but it can be better, maybe by making the end, I don't know how to explain but, maybe make the end a bit less... lengthy. I don't know how to explain, but that's an interesting melody you've got there :)

Alright

I'm rating it based on a melody. I enjoyed it, the standard rave-like melody but not like some which are just boring...the pitch bending towards the end kept me interested to see the potential it has (if you decide to add more to it.)