Well

You may have used Techno drums for this, but it dosn't sound like techno at all to me.

It Needs More Bass.

There's too much treble, I hear the hi-hat, and I hear the snare, and I only hear a small amount of tom hits, and sounds like a synth beat in there. You should try establishing a solid beat with the bass, use that beat to form a syncopated rhythm with the snare supported by the toms and hi-hats. If you add some more bass you might have something. But there's a gap there that's kinda uncomfortable.