I made this a week or two ago. Its not finished as it cuts off abrutly at the end. I may finish it. idk.
Let me know what you think.
would be a crime not to finish this!
i think you have something good here. i like how it cuts down in the middle then progresses back up. i think you could add some techo guitar parts to it. (that would make this a killer song).
so a few improvements can be made, but overall as-is... its a great song. love it
Melodic!
I think this song is great. Simply lovet it. The melody coming in 0:42 is very good. so you got a 10!:)
Planing on making it a full song as it breaks off at the end as you mentioned?
Thanks! like I said I might or might not finish it. I want to though as to me it seems to be my best one so far.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
9thOracle 
