The flow is almost perfect in this melody. I personally think it would be one of your best (or most flowing). All it needs in this section is an addition of 1 or 2 instruments after 0:18.
I like it
This is not too much of a con to knock off any stars.
The drum beat was nice, but it just sounded too weak.
Make it kick harder? Or perhaps change the kicks to something different.
Other then that nothing to critique.
Looking forward to the updates.
Thanks man!I will try changing it! I hope i can make it 100x better.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.