It's pretty good

It's good, but it's lacking.. it feel empty to me. Never forget to use other sounds & samples to fill out a track, they really come in handy.

Keep tryin'!

This sounds like a good start, but obviously needs work. Don't let the negative criticism reviews get you down.
Ask yourself; are you enjoying making your music?
That's all that matters.
For this song specifically, use more synths, make it more interesting, liven' it up!
You have a defined beat and instrument which is great, you even use fades. But add some more background synths, and you'll be on your way!

Hm...

I've listened to some of your tracks now and actually I have to say the same thing about all of them: they do all sound like a real beginner's work. You do always choose very sharp and unenjoyable synthie sounds, your rhythms are very simple and the compositions quite random. It seems that there is no real concept before you start working on your pieces. But the only thing you can do about this kind of thing is listen more to professional music and continue creating your own stuff - you will most likely become much better very soon if you just continue doing stuff.

And please, don't feel offended by the criticism but be encouraged to continue making music.

Trippy intro lol

Not that bad, but it kind of lacks excitement for the first while, making it a little hard to be patient and wait for the goodies. But not bad :D

cool beat nice and suspicious

ten out of ten, MAD AS, i could use that music, great work dude