This is not bad for your second track mate!
For some constructive critisism...your drums need a little more attention to stand out in the mix and give it all a little bit more flava!
also it need more progression throughout because it sounds a little repetative espically for a track that is over 5 mins long! maybe cut it down to 3 mins and add some things like different instruments and a break down.
Hope this helps mate!
Keep it coming!