Enjoy and comment.
Not Bad...
It's a nice melody and it carries very well however you might want to try to vary your instruments a bit more towards the end. Also don't leave the ending kinda just hanging like that. If it was meant to go into a loop you need to fix the transition a bit. Overall a decent song and worth a listen. Nice job dude.
Thanks for feedback. I agree with you in all aspects. Also organ arp part sounds like crap(0.39) and in the end there was glitch with vstplugin so it sounded right just one time.(2.24-2.27) Anyway, unfortunately i don't have this song in "true format" so i can't edit it anymore. It was miracle, i could transfer it from my old hard drive before it died.+) Anyway, big thanks for you comment. Im really appreciate it!
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