Thats awesome, i love that calm thing going on in the background. You should expand on that... and probably try and make a percussion that compliments it, it's quite contrdictary at the moment. I like that stuttered synth stab too. Keep working on this one; looks promising!
Need more instruments
You have the base of a song, but you need to put something on top of all that is happening and i think it will sound better. Something to rival the drums that are so loud.
good advice, thank you! ill try out different things and see how it works
This is more trance though, however that's why I'm going to recommend this, make the lead part stand out more, it sounds to me like the brass or something from a 3x OSC, just a guess. It would sound better with a more square, sawtooth, or sinetooth sound, just something harsh in my opinion. Also, make it not fade in, as in make it attack faster. So that's what I think. I like it though. It's got some really good sounds, as in all the other sounds are pretty cool. It's really just that one. So keep it up, and PM me when the full version is out, if you'd be so kind.
alright, ill send it to you whenever i get it done, thanks! i still havent gotten a complete grasp on what makes a song 'good' the help.. well helps :D