I like the song overall and would like to hear more from you but I feel like it lacked depth.
Yeah I kind of agree with you - check out some of my newer stuff if you get a chance, I think it turned out better. (I also have a newer account - MainStreamBeats) - thanks.
Happy, gets me jumping!
Love the guitar interlude and the overall melody - not dull!
Also, the part where the kind of string sounding thing came in, I found that the timbre of that instrument to be unfitting to the rest of the song. Personally, I think sticking to the more technological sounds would fit better.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.