Hmm.. well in my opinion its actually a very nice track! mixing music myself i know how hard it is to make stuff like this, and i am suure that you put a lot of effort into this. i rated 4 and downloaded. keep it up! you would have gotten 5 if you had made the bass go a lil higher. personally i like when i can feel the bass from my headphones bang onto my ears with a power that blasts my ears.

holy clipping batman

be careful with your levels in relation to the software you have, clipping scares people.

it's pretty good but the clipping scared me

i'm a people

but good job

Hmm It has potential.

It has some potential but the first thing i noticed where some of the drum samples being a bit basic. Maybe different sounding samples.

Second thing wich is an absolute NO in music is that i heared noise, wich means it was gained too much. Try lowering your samples/vst's/effects.

And one thing on the side, the heavy bass drop wasn't that heavy but that's always something to work on later!
I hope i could help you a bit.

Ranter,