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Omg i worked on this song around 30 hours! I had 4 different names, 3 different basslines and etc.

But i very like it!

You too?



Awesome concept.

I actually really liked the melodies and such, but as iheartsonyvideos said, it gets a little repetitive. Ther are also some serious mixing issues, as much as I love a hard beat, this was a little over the top. ONe of the big reasons I'm giving this a 9 is the bass. IT WAS AWESOME, kudos. Anyway I hope I helped a little, keep up the good work!

You-Kraine responds:

i know that this song gets repetitive or that the beat is to strong, i was working on this song for too long so i just uploaded the version i was working on... i never thought that this song could get so many downloads etc!!
thx :)

Not bad.

Pretty nice concept and the beat was pretty strong, BUT:

Mastering is sucky, samples are pretty bad quality (Even if they are VEE) and the whole structure is more or less wrong. It doesn't flow well at all and there's far too much bass.

Although there's a part (2:45) which reaaaaly got my attention and sounded pretty awesome. Although the drums come in and completely demolished the feeling with the overpowering bass, and then that vocal sample came in for the 234876435th time and the whole thing just sounded repetitive and boring.

And 30 Hours? Piss off.
You definetly did not work on this song for 30 hours. You can tell by the production style. Everything is just repeated over and over again, and there's no mastering or mixing whatsoever (which takes exceptionally the most amount of time.)

If you can't get all of your listeners (especially the truthful ones) to enjoy your music, you won't go very far ;/

So i suggest you listen to some other versions of house instead of Dirty South and stuff like that, and get a better idea of how to build up, climax, and structure your music effectively.

Sorry to be a dick, but you won't get better scores without criticism to build upon, right?

With hope that you get better at house,
Dan Roth <33

You-Kraine responds:

wow, first of all, thank you for taking your time to write some much for me :)

i know, i really could do more mastering, but i spended SOOOOOO much time for the chorus etc... the first version of that song is completely different, starting with organ bass with acid synth... and i had 3 different intros and basslines!!
working on this song was very boring so i just uploaded the version i was working on.

thx for your critism!


Iam sry i didnt like this at all. :(

You-Kraine responds:

why sorry? its your opinion.
and why dont you like it? is there somethign i could/should change??


Man, i remember listening to one of your first uploads, and to be honest it was pretty bad... now though... i am really IMPRESSED!

Well done! I can hear fruity loops samples in your song XD

To improve i would make a really deeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep bass when the lead is playing alone.

I like how you altered the lead...

Nice work with the voice sanple. :)


You-Kraine responds:

thanks man!
the fun is that i have more than 10 songs on my pc but i dont wanna upload them :) i think they're much better than this ^^


I love ppls who know thier house music! Sounds like Boys Noize! Where is the sample (ohh baby, i...) from?

You-Kraine responds:

Thanks :)
vengeance essentials electro... in special sounds or else, I cant remember

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Credits & Info


4.20 / 5.00

Mar 10, 2011
12:24 PM EST
File Info
7.8 MB
4 min 17 sec

Licensing Terms

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