It has potential
The beginning was good. It kinda reminds me of a video game opening. Not a specific one though Don't take what comes next the wrong way though. It takes too long to reach the climax, and when it does, the climax doesn't last too long. Oh yeah, the drums seems like its missing something. Maybe bass drum?
It's not a bad song because it has lots of potential. If you redo this song, I would like to hear it again.
Keep it up.
Thanks. Maybe I'll chorus the climactic bit, put in two with one right after the intro, and then one after a lull. I agree that the climax doesn't sound quiet right, but I can't figure out what it is. It's not bass, I think. I think that the upload made the song quieter and killed the sub and treb a little, making the chorus less powerful. Thanks for the review!