I can't even tell what's going on at the beginning and it just sounds bad. Also, the vocalist needs to practice his lung capacity, he seems to breathe a lot and really heavily. The mastering needs some work, overall. The crash cymbal overpowered the rest of the song completely. So there's my opinion. I liked the music at 2:00ish. The screaming sort of took away from it, in my opinion.
Well I thank you for your review. Thanks for listening as well. He's a smoker, so what do you want. I personally like the sound of breathing, and the feel for it. It brings you closer to the musician and his obvious flaws. And yeah, I agree with you on the crash and mix comments. I wanted to work on it longer, but my friends wanted to get it released asap. We had a hard time recording drums, because I didn't have a mixer and we could only use one mic.
Once again, thanks for the review, bud. [: