I changed / added a few notes from my old track, Trailblazer; also, I actually separated the Kontakt tracks this time and did a bunch of equalization on each. It came out pretty good compared to the old one. The old track had virtually zero equalization. It sounded like garbage. But this one doesn't. Or at least I don't think it does.
EDIT:
10/01/11
I re-re-mastered the track, and I added an entirely new section. I also added/changed a few notes.
Catchy
The drums are amazing, but that's all I can hear. I keep getting whiffs of sweet tunes somewhere in the background but they're almost completely overshadowed. I agree with Aaroca, perhaps now that each of the sounds sounds well individually, you should make sure they sound well together.
Ok. Good work. Now make it better.
How?
Make the string instruments a little louder; You cant really hear them as well as you should be able to over the drums. (Or you could make the drums quieter. It's up to you)
And it needs it a bit more time to express itself; The phrase "Short and sweet" doesn't apply here.
Thats all the criti' I got.
5/5 tho. Coz its good.
~Aaroca~
You're definitely right - I took another listen; the strings seem to be a bit drowned out. I'll fix it up.
And yeah I think it sort of is a work in progress. I'll most likely add more to the song. A lot of my work is experimental like this.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Duffany1 
