Great, but not Excellent
There were a lot of subtle surprises in this song, where I thought the melody would go one way but it didn't, or an unexcpected sound would come in. However, it got boring quickly because it was repetetive and didn't go anywhere. There were so many places where you could have a cybal, silence, and then blast into a strong melody with lots of different instruments. (I wish there was a way to tell you what sounds would work because I have a perfect version of this song in my head.) So, once again to repeat: Pros=not what I expected. Con=repetetive, and didn't get stronger.
Good work. Make it better.
I know what you mean. I will try to implement on my next song.
Thanks for your feedback.