Very nice sound

This was a nice sound I was not too fond of the static but that was probably your intent but regardless this was a very nice piece and has a very epic dark sounding kind of like a block buster movie of some sorts it was pretty good stuff but it could be a tad bit shorter but besides that this was notbad

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Could be shorter just a tad

~X~

When this track popped up I immediately though of Dreamscaper, but nope, it wasn't! The melody is nice and ambient, steady and a bit quite, with an industrial touch but still a lot of melody. Would sound good like background music for any kind of creative scene, doesn't make me relate to a dreamland really, but it's a tune you could use for anything, it's peaceful and atmospheric. Keep it up!

-cd-

Another opinion.

To me as soon as I started listening I thought fuck me this would be epic in a movie because if you listen to music from movies it builds up then goes quiet than builds again and moves to the epic bit. So idk when it comes to rating or reviewing music maybe it would be good for the reviewer to understand what the piece is made for. This is epic and I just read your comment and the song made me think of inception before reading that. Keep it up.

Try a little harder?...

I totally disagree with da comment below i love it but not the best in my opinion and you gots lots of talent?!~

Eh.

Your buildup was too long, wayyy too long. And it felt like it was building up for something epic, but it fell short of expectations slightly. I can tell you have some talent, but it's not the best, nor is it the worst. The bass could be a little heavier. Hope this helps for the future!