You have some nice vocals and seems like you could really push the limits a bit more and some stuff was too repetitive but I would love to hear more words pushed for the vocals and channel the deeper sounds from the guy to really bring this to life less repeats for sure but for the most part it was notbad at all anyways keep up the decent work
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More focus on vocals and less repeats
Now that's what I call monotone lyrics. :D It's a pretty funky beat, a good voice, and the lyrics aren't so bad overall, but they just repeat too much IMHO. Maybe if they were said less, with greater impact, annunciated differently, with longer end vocals? Some echo maybe. It's got potential, keep it going!
I like it, I hope you keep up the good work. :)