Full of Highs not enough Lows.
You've just made a cool musical idea however, the track doesn't have enough low frequencies. It has no bottom! :)
Make sure to add a little bottom/low frequencies in order for this track to have a warm sound. That's all I have to say.
All in all you've just made a cool musical idea. My 10 stars belongs to this track!
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