A song is only good if it gives me a blood rush.
And this song definitely fueled adrenaline to my brain.
Just about gave me an aneurysm.
Odd but good
-- The Good --
+Loved the beat
+Thought it was evenly paced
+Sort of told a story (which I look for in songs, makes for a better flow)
+Good use of beats
-- The Bad --
-You killed the vocals by overlapping them too far with the music, its my main problem with most new-age music. They focus so much on the damn beat that they drown out the vocals.
-At some spots the music seems to wobble out of sync (not in reality but I mean the flow seems to distort itself and you change the songs pacing) and it feels like you kind of over-looked certian editing processes or something. I would relate this to someone who is sprinting then they randomly stop dead for a split second and start to do naked hand-stands, then they continue the sprint; kind of leaves me in a "wtf just happened" moment.
-- Overall --
Loved it, just try not to drown out the vocals so much and try to make the song itself smoother.
dude really good job on the synth work, it gives it that nice atmosphere.
Works really well together.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.