I liked everything...but..

The dun dun dun in between the big riffs. It sounded so off key and didn't fit in at all. Ruined it for me.

Well...

You tried. Agree with fateXimpossible. Just don't try so hard, let it come out.

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me to.

i agree with fateXimpossible.

Needs work

Cool, but some issues:
On the guitar -- add some sustain, sounds weird how it just cuts off

Also, your mixing favours the guitars way to much, the cymbal crashes from the drums sound like the background when they need to be accenting the rythem. A good start, but keep working on it