but ur intros are abit to long the drum n slow hip hop feel is what im digging. i wish i could do stuff like this but im only a begginner at this stuff sooo yea keep doin your thing
I actually like the beat
the drum adds a nice touch. I am a fan of non-newgrounds ambient pop, the reaon that i dont like new grounds AP is cause the never have some good slow beat like the the stuff i like. this sorta reminds me of something Insect Airport would make exept it usually doesn't have a piano going through out the entire song, which is more port blue. its sorta abstract like Insect Airport but with piano like Port Blue which has this ocean-y feel (P.S. if you dont know who i am talking about then look up there names on youtube, they're actually the same guy Adam Young aka Owl City but look them up separately if you want to, its real nice)
Oh my, I've been talking about some else this whole time, this is nice and again i like the drum beat, keeps it from getting boring, even though it would still be good with out it.
You have an incredibly nice opening, but in my opinion, you ruined the feel for your song by adding the drum-line to it. If I had done this song, I would have simply left that part out.
Thanks for the review!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.