This was pretty good. It sounded awesome. But at 1:37 I got scared because I was wearing headphones XD.
Hm... Volume control needs to be worked on, things get really sloppy and the trumpet sounding lead is way over powering. The beat really doesn't seem to work with this either.
And by Buddhas grave I swear I almost quit listening at 1:10 when the disaster happened. That lead guitar is horrendous, and so is the other thing whatever it is that comes in. And that crash is WAY too loud.
Get some compression, master the sound.