Hello Newgrounds, me here with an attempt at a new vocal song!
let me know what you think!
Youtube link: http://www.youtube.com/wa tch?v=mpzwBCME4os
Lyrics!:
Wake up in a whole new place
Memories of life have been erased
I gotta find somewhere to go...
(Gotta find somewhere to go)
Not another soul in sight
Living under the fading light
I can't stay out here alone
(Gotta build up on my own)
Looking out in the dark of night
Trying not to die of fright
Many creatures knocking' on my door
Looking out in the dark of night
Trying not to die of fright
Many creatures knocking' on my door
Looking out in the dark of night
Trying not to die of fright
Many creatures knocking' on my door
Come on dawn!
Night falls...
It's not safe outside anymore
Time to run and hide
and await the dawn's new light
gotta live on my own
I sure do miss home
But now I'm here
In this place
Gotta build back up
Hard to believe I'm still alive
But I've still got the will to fight
Time to go with weapon in hand
(Sword in hand, gotta take my chance)
Now it's time to end this blight
Under the full moon light
I've only got one chance
(Gotta fight with these two hands)
Going out with sword in hand
I'm gonna conquer this land
I've only got this chance...
Going out with sword in hand
I'm gonna conquer this land
I've only got this chance...
Going out with sword in hand
I'm gonna conquer this land
I've only got this chance
I choose to fight
Night falls...
It's not safe outside anymore
Time to run and hide
and await the dawn's new light
gotta live on my own
I sure do miss home
But now I'm here
In this place
Gotta build back up
Night falls...
It's not safe outside anymore
Time to run and hide
and await the dawn's new light
gotta live on my own
I sure do miss home
But now I'm here
In this place
Gotta build back up
Wait... it's about... minecraft?! XD woahhh!
GreatLyrics!
This song is really really good. I like it a lot. I do have to agree with the other two reviews, the actual singing is a little awkward, but the lyrics are really good and the instrumental is great as well. May I ask if I can try my hand at singing this song? Maybe you can send me the instrumental?
I have been working on newer versions of this song, but I will think about your request. I am so humbled that someone wants to sing one of my songs! I will PM you if I decide to let you sing it. (Sorry, I haven't checked newgrounds in quite some time)
Minecraft
Is exactly what I thought it was about before I noticed the comment at the end. I lol'd when I read that though. This song is really good, but I'm with omega on this one, the singing needs to be sped up a bit. Most of the words seem a little dragged out. Other then that though, I liked it. Great song again. The lyrics are fantastic though. Absolutely love them.
haha, it's a great game! but thank you for your feedback, much appreciated. I shall fix the singing!
Not bad. . .
I liked it, and you instrumentation was excellent.
Your first verse seemed out of cadence, the way you were speaking was out of sync with the song.
The lyrics were good, and so were the instruments just the way you sing your verses was a little off sounding. Some of them could have been sung quicker and it could have been really great, the chorus is a good example, it sounds great.
You have a good voice, just work on your cadence a bit.
I really enjoyed it, good job overall,
Omega
thank you for your review Omega, I will certainly take your words into consideration!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
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