This has a creepy mansion feel to it actually. The static and lyrics are also pretty cool to add as it becomes retro sounding for most of the song. The lyrics have a good chime to them actually. The vocals are very good too.
The drums sound pretty nice. Really liking how the bass flows in a creepy manner relative to the beat. The synth and vocals just bring the whole song togehter though so that is great though.
I have to say that overall you did a pretty good job here.
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Now, for me to reveal the secret behind the drums... There are absolutely no drums contained within this song. The percussion track was made (in chronological order relative to the beat) with a fork scratching a plate, laying the fork down gently onto the plate, a cup being hit against my Yamaha PSR-510, a pill bottle being shaken, a spoon striking the lid of the pill bottle twice and then once on a box, and the last thing (obviously) is the cup on the keyboard again. Of course, I took this dope beat and put effects and shit on it, most notably distortion.
Pretty wicked, right?
I like the instrument selection and the lyrics were cool and well sung too (that's important)
The chorus, was hard to understand, it was very quiet.
And your lyrics could be bettered by also making them a little louder so they stuck out over the music
other than that, awesome song great work!
I mixed it that way on purpose. I didn't want vocals prevailing over the music that I poured my heart into. The vocals are there to compliment the music, rather than the other way around. Of course, you're hearing it through computer speakers, not a stereo system (which it is mixed for).
Also, I put the lyrics in the description because I knew that people don't usually understand the lyrics in my songs the first time they hear them.