Gone Astray
Credits & Info
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Author Rahmemhotep
- Uploaded
- Mar 1, 2011 | 3:13 PM EST
- File Info
- Song
- 4 MB
- 4 min 26 sec
- Score
- 4.17 / 5.00
Licensing Terms
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
- Score:
- Rated 4.17 / 5 stars
- Plays & Downloads:
- 434 Plays | 26 Downloads
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- Genres:
- Other - Miscellaneous
- None
Author Comments
I think that this is probably the best song I've ever done. I made this song a month and some amount of days before I posted it here. I want people to hear this and when they do I want them to stop and think about what I'm trying to tell people here and after that I want them to strive to act for what is right.
Lyrics: When you don't deserve the flick back you don't just sit back and let your neck snap!
All them fools tryin' to stop yo come back they takin' yo shit back and stash it like
pack rats.Why don't you just let yourself go and smash they egos with an Al
Pacino look in your eyes, you see that everybody dies and corruption fills our lives
while they overflow with lies of which no one can deny. How can anyone ask why when the reasons are all seasoned with the bullshit and denial of our nation? This is the time, this is the generation let us all band together with no more separation!
This is our world and you be livin' in it buddy, We won't stop hittin' 'til you're battered and bloody and your pain will make our power greater. You fuck with the king, no, you
only gonna be met by failure!
It's just another day, in our society where nothing makes sense.
If our camaraderie can fix the world today then let us shake on it!
So far to see our path go straight so hard to achieve without a psychotic break.
How did we stray so far from the shepherd's gaze?
No one will see it if we don't start now. It's hard to get up when you started broken down.
Hey, Hey never forget this!
When you don't deserve the flick back... All them fools tryin' to stop your comeback... Why don't you just let yourself go and smash they egos with an Al Pacino look in your eyes, you see that everybody dies and corruption fills our lives while they overflow with lies-- How can anyone ask why when the reasons are all seasoned with the bullshit and denial of our- FAILURE! THIS IS THE TIME. Let us all band together with no more separation! This is our world and you be livin' in it buddy, We won't stop hittin' 'til you're battered and bloody and your pain will make our power greater. You fuck with the king, no, you only gonna be met by failure!
EDIT: There is an updated version, completed, that will be released on my next album.
Reviews
Rated 5 / 5 stars
Funky Down
This has a creepy mansion feel to it actually. The static and lyrics are also pretty cool to add as it becomes retro sounding for most of the song. The lyrics have a good chime to them actually. The vocals are very good too.
The drums sound pretty nice. Really liking how the bass flows in a creepy manner relative to the beat. The synth and vocals just bring the whole song togehter though so that is great though.
I have to say that overall you did a pretty good job here.
Review Request Club
Now, for me to reveal the secret behind the drums... There are absolutely no drums contained within this song. The percussion track was made (in chronological order relative to the beat) with a fork scratching a plate, laying the fork down gently onto the plate, a cup being hit against my Yamaha PSR-510, a pill bottle being shaken, a spoon striking the lid of the pill bottle twice and then once on a box, and the last thing (obviously) is the cup on the keyboard again. Of course, I took this dope beat and put effects and shit on it, most notably distortion.
Pretty wicked, right?
Rated 4 / 5 stars
Impressive
I like the instrument selection and the lyrics were cool and well sung too (that's important)
The chorus, was hard to understand, it was very quiet.
And your lyrics could be bettered by also making them a little louder so they stuck out over the music
other than that, awesome song great work!
Omega
I mixed it that way on purpose. I didn't want vocals prevailing over the music that I poured my heart into. The vocals are there to compliment the music, rather than the other way around. Of course, you're hearing it through computer speakers, not a stereo system (which it is mixed for).
Also, I put the lyrics in the description because I knew that people don't usually understand the lyrics in my songs the first time they hear them.