Melody - the perception of pleasant arrangements of musical notes.
So basically. Notes that sound good together that are placed one after another.
Its funny cause i always see your reviews around the portal, but when i checked your profile you didnt have any new songs.. and now you do! haha.. anyways.. Do you have the full version of Fl? cause i have a ton of sample packs and vsts i can send you if youd like.. when i was just starting i didnt even know what a vst was xD so i think your music would sound better with better stuff.. you know? :)
Anyways. on to the song.
I like the name.. it caught my attention and fits the song very well..
I think you should start using more effects.. like the Fast LP for the intro.. or a soundgoodizer and such.. You can pm me if you want more info on those things..cause im not sure how much you know already xD
I liked the melody.. It was calming.. kinda sad.. but thats okay xD i think that when your melody comes back at :28, that you should either put it up an octave or change up the notes a little bit.. cause you'll see later that no one likes repatition at all.. so it would be good to change things up..
Also.. for the drums.. you should instead of doing it kinda random... make it.. a kick on 4.. a clap on the second and forth kick.. and a hi hat inbetween every space.. do you understand? thats kinda like the generic drums if you know what i mean..
all in all.. its not that bad.. it blows my first couple songs right out of the water :P just keep making songs and messing with new things.. cause you ususally learn new things with every new song you make :)
Keep it up man