No está mal
Pero desearÃa algo mas del elemento sorpresa.
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For me this is a part in a book where the main character is banished from the only place he's known his whole life.
1cc1 responds:
Thank you for commenting. I think you mean that you would like it to kick in when the piano comes in, I'll try messing with it a bit more. Thank's for listening!
~DoJ
Not Mass effect (fooled me) :P
Starts out pretty calm, yet nervous. The drums add intensity, till it drops a bit then returns kinda to the original feel, this time more agitated. after that it's a little repetitive
but the ending progression was solid and sounded good but you kinda just looped it a little too much too, the fade out worked for this song, so I won't knock it :P
Instead of just looping the original two sections, switch it up a bit, helps from getting boring after a bit.
Pretty good job overall, switch up your melodies some more and this is easily a 10.
Omega
1cc1 responds:
Great, thank you for your input. I was thinking it was a bit repetitive, I'll mess around with the beginning 2 parts. The fade out is a bit of a cop out but I'm glad it worked!
Thank you for listening!
~DoJ
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