Video Game Music...
HEY! I KNOW THAT BASS :D I used that when I started FLP aswell :P Now I make my own sounds, but that aside. Not much happened, some fills and some cool changes (or just add-ups) could have tensed this alot :D I'm working on video game music now (for Coresoft, a small video game producin company in The Netherlands) and I think they wouldn't like it if I made this as a video game song ;) The basic is good, but it's kinda monotone. Loops have 2 be short but with alot of changes, so that you won't get bored even after listening to it for a million times. But keep it up man, you have potential!
Not much diversity - the song doesn't really go anywhere, just the same 4 bars throughout. Only like strings and a bass sound used. Maybe you can spice it up a little by adding more sounds or another melody in the middle or something.
yes, thank you that is what i needed, constructive critizism. i know this song didnt have much too it but i will keep that in mind while submitting future songs.
First off first post, props. You said that this was a short, it's like freaking two minutes long. When ya say a short it should be like less than a minute, ya feel me? Good song though bud. Even though it seems to be a little soft. Keep up the good work, PEACE.