everyone's an expert
here on newgrounds :p
you should try and make a funky bassline for a song, your bass tracks would really work well as funk imho.
the title doesn't really fit, but it's not that important..
the piano is a little cliche, maybe you could snazz it up a little somehow.
i think it'd sound neat if you put a reverb effect over the entire song, and automated it to kick in around :42 (cut it off when you're doing solos & duets).
don't set the effect too high, and make the length inder 1.5 sec, and it'll fill the song up well.
if it doesn't work, then whatevs, because it's not too hard to do..
now that i read the author's comments, i feel sort of like an idiot :p
wellp, keep on truckin' brokaline.