not bad mate, sounds good so far.
It does need some work on the mastering, theres a bit of distortion going on throughout your track but it does have some potential to be something quite good with a bit of polishing ;)
Thanks. I plan on figuring out where the distortion came from tomorrow some time, as when I was mixing it, there was none. Something must have happened while the file was rendering.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.