Sorry man, but 128bpm is usually just meant for house...which this isn't. If anything, it's a slow dance...and dance isn't ever meant to be THIS slow. lol
If you want to try a style, you have to actually stray away from the dance stuff man. I know it's hard to in FL, but it's definitely possible. Just listen to a ton of house, listen to your song, and take away what doesn't sound "house-y." Believe me, this works, and you might be heart-broken to say goodbye to some of these melodies or sounds, but it has to happen to fix the genre and style.
I would really be interested in hearing what comes out if you do indeed do that, and PM me if you do.