a lot of good things
I liked the beginning but when the drums came in at 00:35 I thought they were too loud and perhaps not the right style. I thought "Hmm I'm going to sleeeep and then BOOM here are some drums... actually that drum is more like a BONK than a boom but either way it really stands out a lot and maybe that's what you were going for in this track, I don't know...) When it got to 00:52 I thought maybe it was going somewhere back to its roots with the great chord progression starting in that section (00:52 to 1:20) and then the drums came back and you did a drum attack at 1:26 (??) that seemed out of place, like it was about to break into rave techno or something. Then you did that chord progression again and broke into the native language sample which iI liked. Anyway actually there may be good things going on here and the fault may be in the sample library, and also deciding whether or not to be loud or soft. Anyway you get a good score because I loved the intro with the jungle noises and the chord progression at 00:52, and because I skipped to 2:30 and listened to the rest of the song (the drums were really quiet at 2:30) and because of the native samples at 1:38. I just skimmed back through the song actually and I love the "Um bom bom, ayah ayah" native language sample which you used at 1:38 and I may download this track just to hear that part again. Anyway a lot of good things going on here please keep improving!