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something i am doing in my free time. i absolutely love this book and i am sorry if you don't think i did it right TT>TT

i hope you all find a good story at least in this ^_^

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I like it, you're pretty good at conveying the emotion in the lines, which is a really important thing a lot of people forget about. Still room to improve on that though, sometimes it sounds like you got a little lost in the lines, but definitely good work.

Your voice itself is actually quite good, smooth and clear, went well with the story. Complimenting someone's natural voice is a pretty awkward experience, but I'll just go ahead and say yours was nice to listen to.

My biggest complaint is that honestly, it's too quiet. I'm not saying you need to talk louder, but perhaps use the Amplify feature to boost the volume or something. I'm no professional so that could be horrible advice, but that's the way I'd do it. I had to crank the volume to max and adorn my headphones just to hear you.

Also your mic has some static noise associated with it, of course I'm not gonna say to buck up and go buy a proper mic, but perhaps you should also toy with the Noise Removal feature to remove some of it.

Nice stuff though, it was definitely worth uploading!

anjidu responds:

thank you so much ^_^ (i will keep that in mind)

:3 thank you very much on that as well.

yea, when i amplify it gets even more static and noise. i still need to figure out how to make it decent quality. im working with a rock band mic so idk how much better it is going to get >.<. im trying to get some money to get a preamp converter bc apparently my dad has an old mic from the 70's or something (but i tend to be bad with money and spend it almost immediately after i get some TT.TT)

thank you so much. im happy you enjoyed :D and thank you for the constructive criticism. ^_^

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Uploaded
Feb 25, 2011
8:10 PM EST
Genre
Voice Demo
File Info
Song
6.4 MB
7 min 0 sec

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.