Good stuff.
heh, your buddy Adam, plays the guitar as fast as you Rad, it takes skillz to play that quickly, and not break apart.
There was a melody that formed towards the end, a nice soft melody, that REALLY got my head perked, starting at 1:52 in the song. I think if you and Adam focused on that small section, used it for a foundation for a song, expanded it, maybe have another guitar accompany it, you would get a real catchy, neat tune.
In fact I can safely say everything past 1:52 was pretty neat. Up to that point, it was a bit repetitive, and the riff was not that profound or captivating.
If you shorten the intro, expand the section past 1:52, it would be cool.
Adding a drum beat would only serve to make it better :).
Keep them coming Rad, one day you will be great.