Saw your advertise me for this song....
The main thing this song suffers from is the bass is really off from the song... maybe your using the wrong type of bass, but it's something I would work on.
Pm me if you have any questions.
Reviewed this song over at theaudioportal, so i'll go ahead and review it again here. It's not a bad song at all. The melodies were awesome, as well as the synths used to create those melodies. However, like I told you over at theaudioportal.com, the drums need to be louder. What you have here is more pop than hip hop. Boost those drums a bit, and you'd get a perfect score from me. Nice work overall.
Thanks for reviewing!
I might take this one off, remaster it and name it something else so people aren't expecting Hiphop! :)