Whatever sound you put at 0:04 to middle and 1:51 onward is sicking for me. Honestly, I'm stop at 0:45, and continue when I remind I should listen to whole song before review, which below par (but acceptable) until that sound coming again. It might much better if you put that sound off even if it would be too plain. (It shake my stomach, you know)
Very interesting review. I'm sorry the "waaaah" bass vibrated your stomach.
I will consider what you said but it's hard to work with your criticisms because most of it would be cut. :\
But I can do it. I can form the song into any form really, of course, it would turn into something else entirely. Maybe that's what I'll do. I'm glad you liked the end, most people have said that's a good part.
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