I can't believe people still give out zeros on here. Hmm.
It really isn't that bad. A few suggestions though:
The clicky clacky percussion could be lowered just a tad, and the instrumentation could be brought up just a bit.
The only other thing I can think of is when that ambient saw bass thing comes in, the note at :54 is out of key. The song is in a minor key, but that note is trying to make it a major. I would change that one note.
Other than that, I like the vibe this has, and think it will be great after a little more revision.