Yes!

I like how you synchronized the down patterns with the low-cut filter effect on the noise. Although you should have doubled the trill in the third beat of the twelfth measure, I think the overall tone of the bass exemplifies the tremolo of the 4C#.

In other words: No.

Well...

Sadly... for some reason my volume was turned all the way up (I guess i was listening to a quiet song) Idk.. This scared the shit out of me... lol

10/10 just for that XD

Nonsense indeed..

Yeah, nonsense is right...
Not much more to say about it, except that my ears are bleeding just a little. 5/10, 2/5. I hope to see more serious contributions from you in the future.