I must have FLP.
Anyway cowbell at the intro stood out too much. Slight reverb on the entire track, especially the bass, would improve it. Lead came in a little too late. I noticed you used chords that flow together differently. As odd as it sounds it flows. Especially In your other song True nature. I really like that part of your style, so try to emphasize on that. Dont force it though; let it come naturally.
Thanks :) and yeah I love odd progressions lol
Dude! GREAT JOB! THIS IS A GREAT ONE~~!!!!!!!! AWESOME
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